Rita asked. ], [They pant heavily, before realizing it was all a nightmare. I can't let those crazy beasts see me! Hahahaha! (They arrive home. (Luna gasps) You all dont quite grasp the concept! ", Lynn: 'Oh my gosh, you're right. Everyone heads to Vanzilla, but Lincoln still stays in place). The parents were shown to be hypocritical at the end, telling their children to behave when they cause the whole family to be kicked out and then tricking them into going to Aunt Ruth's and letting them have a nice weekend at a homemade spa (yes I'm aware the Aunt Ruth thing happens more or less unintentionally but come on, it doesn't really make a massive difference). "Why?" Uh-uh, I'm nothaving it. Lincoln: So where did this looney belief that i was bad luck suddenly come from, huh!? "And just remember," Lori said, and then she and her siblings yelled one last time, "WE HATE YOU!" Leni: *Gasp* My Sewing Machine! (pauses for a second) "You know what, I'll decide when we get there and see what movies are playing. Lincoln: But you were all so gullible and stupid! No Such Luck (Alternative ending, my version) . Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. *Later in the Duke's room, Lincoln approaches Angus* Angus: Ah Lincoln, What's seems to be on your mind? ", Lincoln: (to Leni) "Leni, all those times I went to the Mall with you to pick out clothes, anything bad happen those times? ], Baseball Announcer: "Yowza." That answer definitely caused this man's brain to get straight to work. (The sisters tear up over their passions being so heavily insulted) I hate it that you lowlifes never learn a thing! ", Lincoln: "No, Lucy. Lincoln: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Not you or Lucy. ESPECIALLY THE EXTRA TOE! I spread one little white lie just to get more free time because i cant afford to come to so many actvities all in one go! 2 months had come and gone and the parents were no longer grounded. He crawls over to the kitchen sink and drinks deeply.). My team needs that! It was wrong of me to blame you for my failure and call you bad luck! Scared as to what will happen if they say something wrong, eventually, Lincoln stepped forward and proceeded to say, "We're really sorry, sir. Lola finished with. N Eddy's big picture show . "What she said is, that you two are grounded for two months and you can only leave this house to head to work or to go to the supermarket." Lincoln: I said NO! I hate that you don't care about anyone, but yourselves! Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were just about ready to ram these three rude jerks with the couch in the room. Some blonde girl in a green dress gave us a room key and told us to enjoy our time here." lincoln. The worst part is, they had no argument against this. Thats not how it works! "Same here." MLP - Twilight Sparkle, Applejack and Pinkie. Did anything life threatening happen? Post a journal. "you bad luck, Lincoln!" ", Lincoln: "I won't deny that I brought this on myself. Lincoln: Lucy! I demand an explanation! You're all just pure wastes of life! My last one just got messed up and i wish to make one properly. "WHENEVER WE VISIT YOU WE ARE MISERABLE!" Except for Lynn). "Not cool, guys." [Everyone headed to the living room to sleep together. Opening the door slightly, Luna stuck her head out and saw a man, somewhere in his early 30's with Caucasian skin and short brown hair, wearing a security uniform. Lincoln asked his parents. ", Lola: (with a sad look on her face) "No. "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude. "What we're saying is is that you two are going to be confided to this building for the next 2 calendar cycles, only to leave for employment reasons or to get us sustenance from the one of our beloved stores." You took it too far! I've had an account on this website for about a year and a half now and this is the first story I'm doing for it. She started pacing the room, or more specifically around the couch. Lisa responded with in her genius talk. But the woman did, "That your parents were caught skinny dipping after hours? Taking the device out of the girl's hand. The squirrel mascot is dancing a little less energetic than usual. Now, let me make this clear! ], Family: "CONGRATULATIONS! ], Lynn: "Lincoln, you could've tripped and cost us the entire game! So, I plan to rectify that. Lana said, glaring at her parents. You were fine with me sleeping outside and being locked outside? Lincoln: (tearful) No! Lynn Sr.: Look, son, families will have bad days every now and than. Putting the phone on speaker, they waited for her to pick up the phone. I was being selfish!. Computer typing was heard yet again and, after a few moments. If you dont want to wear the squirrel costume, dont wear it. WE DESERVE TO BE HURT!!!! Luan: (with a broken voice) "We treated you like an outcast because we were stupid enough to believe that junk! "What's wrong with Aunt Ruth?" Now, let me make this clear! Lincoln asked, as he started crying yet had an angry look on his face, "What's really lousy is that you guys had the nerve to make us feel guilty for the stuff we did when the reason we got kicked out of the hotel was because you two decided to act like irresponsible teenagers and go for a late night swim in the pool without any swimwear on!" Kick the . I was being a sore loser! Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Lincoln: yeah. 2022 - 2023 Add to Favourites Comment I know you would never label me bad luck, and youd never neglect me. This article should a part 2 episode in Season 5. Submit your writing. We know we don't deserve it, but we hope you can forgive us! Even more computer typing was heard but soon afterward the woman on the other going, "Hhhmmmm.," was also heard. Lincoln: I hate this! Lincoln: I dont think I told you I was bad luck. (Bursts into tears). IT'S ALL MY FAULT!!! Needless to say, they were not pleased. Rita: How about we all sleep in the living room tonight? Making the Grade / Vantastic Voyage. Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. ", Lincoln:[to the viewers] "Maybe I can move into Lisa's fallout shelter. (The other sisters come over onto the main couch. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. They were glad that they were still together like a loving family. (The family screams in horror. "EXCUSE ME???!!!" Sighing, Rita turns to her children and said, "Look I know Aunt Ruth isn't your favorite relative" She was interrupted by Lynn Jr. saying, "That's the understatement of the century." Lynn and Lana were accidentally destroying the hotel shower. "It looks like the room is being occupied by a Mr. Todd Fowler, Kyle Dawson and Miguel Diaz as of this morning." "But she's still family," Rita added in, "And family stick together no matter what." They wanted to comfort him, but they both knew that he would push them away. Hearing the guy mention 'the blonde girl in a green dress,' made them get even more nervous as they knew the girl he was referring to was their sister, Leni. (They pile into Vanzilla and go searching for him). I hate gator wrestling! "No need," another voice was heard saying, everyone turned and saw Jeffrey, the spa manager standing in the doorway, glaring at all of them, "I got staff to pack all of your stuff into your bags and bring it downstairs when I was informed you were still here by Maddie, one of my front desk clerks." During the drive, there was nothing but silence, which is very uncommon for a vehicle that is usually occupied by 13 people. My disgust for them is almost as strong as Edwin's lust for blood. Also, just to note, not all of my stories are going to be this gritty or serious or emotional. DeviantArt Protect. Reacting to The Loud House is an ongoing series of The Loud House and The Casagrandes fics written by J Tom (or JTom09) in which many characters from both shows watch episodes of said shows. She hugged him back.] Sell custom creations to people who love your style. No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt N literature No such luck: alternate ending 2 Add to Favourites Comment By iann28 Published: Apr 5, 2018 Favourites 0 Comments 4.9K Views *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. Looking at her parents in shock, she said, "You got us kicked out because you decided to go skinny dipping?" "Which room number is it?" "I'm not sure," Felix responded with, "I've got two groups of people saying they have one of our hotel rooms at the same time. I feel like a fool! I've gotten complaints of loud noises, stuff breaking and a possible brawl breaking out in one hotel room. No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane Cartoons Comics Funny Comics Loud House Rule 34 The Loud House Lincoln The Loud House Fanart Loud House Characters Funny Comic Strips Movies Coming Out Sonic And Amy More information . While they were still upset about their parents' behavior and getting them kicked out of an awesome hotel, they understood why they did what they did and understood that they shouldn't had forced their parents to take them on their vacation. EVER!! The furniture was all over the place, the shower was ruined, the air conditioner was gone and he noticed a 17-year old girl with blonde hair in a blue shirt outside, about to jump from the side of the balcony. ", Lincoln: "You know what, Lynn. Those words just made Lynn Sr. and Rita feel even more lousy and know for certain that they messed up big time. But i didnt expect to be ejected from the house and lose everything i had! They started running towards them as fast as possible, when suddenly, the sound of a fist pounding against the door is heard. showing a flashback of the episode No Such Luck. ", Lincoln: "Well what are we standing here for? Literature. You're like some mindless mob and I hate that! "WELL I HATE ALL OF YOU, TOO!" Leni: WE DON'T DESERVE LOVE OR THIS TRIP TO THE BEACH!!!! You tricked us in the first place. Since the room is occupied, it should've shown up as that in the computer database. (Cries) All my precious tiaras. SQUIRRELS WIN!" She pointed to the back row of seats. I don't want to pick a movie you guys possiblyly won't enjoy, I want to watch something all of us will enjoy." Everyone winced at the final words out of Lola's mouth, but not the woman on the other end. The family sees this and gasps in shock.). My first story is done. Bobby: Well, I hope her legs are capable of making up for it. ", Lynn: (angered, she gets closer to Lincoln and raises a fist at him) "If you don't get out of here, I'm gonna-", Luna: (pull Lynn back) "WHOA! But right now, no! I was stupid to believe in luck and to rely on it. Anyway, as the title suggests, this is an alternate ending fanfic for Loud House Season 2 episode "Suite and Sour." The minute after those words left Luna's lips, the security officer leaned his face in front of Luna's and responded with, "You can help me by letting me into your room. "I know you're headstrong sometimes, but I know that deep down in your heart, you love me. What kind of parents would do that? Lynn Sr.: (tears up) I can't believe he said we're not a real family. Lana: You know, on second thought, I don't want to be at the beach. Luna: We just weren't thinking bro, we're sorry. It's been a day since Lincoln tried to convinced them that he wasn't bad luck. If you didn't show up, I don't want to think about what would've happened." Rita stood up and heads to the door. Lisa: A terrible case of state of mind if ever I saw one. ", (after a few seconds of silence, Lincoln smiles at them), Lincoln: "I forgive you." (Lincoln, without hesitation, hugs her, with the rest of the sisters joining in for another group hug. Then, he opened it up. Lynn Sr. stuttered for a few moments and said, "Ground us?! Hmm. First, if they are to go on vacation by themselves, they let the kids stay at home, second, they agree to bring swimwear and wear when going for a late night swim, three, if the place they stay at is great then they go there for a family vacation in the future and four, no more visits to Aunt Ruth's. And when Maddie got up from the desk, what she saw horrified her. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. I dont want to support you psychos! "Yeah Felix," she said, concerned hearing the pain in his voice, "What's wrong?" NOTHING!! ", Luna: "No, you were right. I have truly failed the term 'scientist'. I hate boring science lectures! I hate softball! I hate that you do nothing but ruin other people's lives, including one of your own! Lincoln yelled, "WE HATE YOU!" (He gathers up a sleeping bag, pillow and snacks. YOU'LL BE HAPPY TO KNOW YOU WON'T HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT DEALING WITH ME OR MY CATS OR MY DISGUSTING PUDDING OR MY BUNIONS ANYMORE! He'll ruin it for them!" Rita: "Even worse than they already were!" Chester: "OK, if you know the words to this song, sing along!" [Lincoln starts song off with turntables and keyboards.] You're scaring even me. I certainly am not! Honest! Knowing they sealed the deal and there's no way they will ever have to go back to Aunt Ruth's, Lincoln said, "Well so long, freakshow. I'm not. Lisa: I was a fool to fall for it all, I swear. Morag: is it now? BECAUSE I DON'T WANT YOU LITTLE DEMONS ANYWHERE NEAR MY HOUSE AGAIN!" "Her pudding is at least a hundred years old and will cause us all to go to the hospital for stomach pumping," Lisa added. Let me tell you this! [shows the score: Hazeltuck Lions: 3, Royal Woods Squirrels: nothing.] He flies over to her and onto her hand.) They felt nothing but guilt and shamein their hearts, even the goth child who claims to not have one. However, that silence would not last long as the security man and the guests saw the kids' faces turned red with anger, steam started bellowing out of their ears and a devastating fire formed in their eyes, the four started trying to get out of the room quickly, as they knew something bad was going to happen. Almost as good as any Ace Savvy convention. I don't even care about that anymore. Rita: I guess this is what we get for selling all his stuff. I have failed as a human being. I hate that you never listen to reason! Pre-Story Notice: Hello everyone. And we're sorry, but it's been so long since your father and I had time, real time, to ourselves and I guess we got carried away." It's too broken, even for me! AND I'M GOING TO GET A RESTRAINING ORDER JUST TO KEEP YOU AWAY!" Time i sort out these looney superstitions once and for all!! Lincoln: "Oh really." We wont! Like Lynn Sr. said, it wasn't an easy road and there were times when they were ready to give up, but they didn't and, as a result, their kids forgave them for their actions, more or less. Said baby had an angry face and she glared at her mom and dad, "Poo poo!" I was horrible to you! It was never fun but I'm glad it's over." I WISH YOU'D NEVER EXISTED!!!!! Youre our brother! No more Loud Family? (Lincoln says nothing to his mother. Luna blushed. Lisa: (sighs in humiliation) Me neither..falling for some dumb superstition, despite always taking pride in science and not curses!! Okay this episode has already been hated enough you can pretty much type in the rants for 'No such luck' and there will be a lot of those, I too hated this e. Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. ), Lynn: (Screams in despair) ROASTED, BEATEN, VERBALLY THRASHED AND TOSSED INTO THE SEA BY MY ONLY BROTHER!!!! Lola: (sniffles) He called us all dummies.and a waste of life. Luan: (starts to cry) He also called us monsters..that we don't care for anyone, but ourselves.. Lana: He did have a point. Lincoln: I'd like to keep this in private, but i got a question for you angus. I can take being kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, butbeing locked out of my own home?! I hate golf! Inspiration for this fanfiction comes from few positive predictions for No Such Luck. A late St. Patrick's Day story for austin2468. "Huh. Lynn Sr.: OUR ONLY SON DESPISES US, WE WERE COMPLETE IDIOTS, WE RUINED HIM AND WE DESERVE IT!!!! I know remaking this episode has been done to death, so this is probably the only alternate ending I'm going to do for this episode. (Both glare at each other) First you threaten me with your lousy pop stick of a baseball bat to make me come to a disgusting game thats nothing but a waste of time, than you blame me for your loss, than you help ruin my life, than youre too stupid to listen to my confession and admit that you were wrong and than at another stupid game you dont even make it up to me and you make me into some silly object! They got to Vanzilla and saw their children sitting the car, very mad and upset. It spawned dozens of fanfics about it, and caused his whiny fanbase to go haywire on the sisters. I'll admit, it was stupid and wrong of me to lie to them and take advantage of it, and I probably should've just told them that I just wanted some me time, but honestly, I think this is way more than I deserve. The Loud House No Such Luck Altern. CircularBoat742 19 March 2017 User blog:CircularBoat742. "YOU THINK I ENJOY BEING VISITIED BY YOU LITTLE MONSTERS?! Rita: (Gasps) Lincoln! The way the security officer said, 'Right now,' made Luna nervous, it was typically the tone of voice used when someone was in very serious trouble. Suite and Sour / Back in Black. IM hoping to show this to Nickelodeon themselves someday. Then you'll be treated like irresponsible teenagers." Would you mind me speaking to Angus for a bit? "YOU KIDS ARE NOTHING BUT TROUBLE AND TO BE HONEST, I WAS GLAD WHEN YOUR PARENTS DECIDED TO TAKE YOU TO THAT HOTEL BECAUSE I COULDN'T STAND THE THOUGHT OF BEING STUCK WITH YOU MONSTERS FOR TWO DAYS!" You're not even a real family anymore and I HATE that! And Lily was doing, whatever 15 month old babies do when nobody's really watching them (another author interruption: I know this sounds vague and it sounds like Lily is going to hurt herself but she's not. You love baseball. We're already hanging on a thread as it is! That response caused an immediate reaction of confusion from the kids. He leaps onto Lynn in a fight cloud, the two yell and shout over hits, kicks, punches, bites and headbutts. WE MAKE EVERYTHING WORSE!!! "I can't believe you kids just did that," Rita said, tears running down her face like a river. So expect a bill in the mail." "Good riddance." Trivia. When they saw the lobby, they knew the bill was going to be expensive. It was created for a St. Patrick's Day episode, but flopped hard. I hate the fact that you all act like spoiled brats! Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. Incredible from The Incredibles on the cover. (yet another author interruption: I know this sounds harsh, but in all fairness, that is a pretty stupid thing to do and the reason behind it doesn't help). And then blew more raspberries and spit on them some more (hopefully the last author interruption but if not then I'll let you know: I know her seat is located in the first row behind the driver in canon but for this instance of going along with not wanting to look at their parents, the siblings put Lily's seat in the far back to help the other siblings not have to look at their parents, I know this is a little wrong, but please understand it shows how mad the siblings are). "Although," Lana, a six-year old tomboy wearing a baseball, added, "if it helps we tried to fix it." Lincoln: (marches up to Lynn) Straight from you, you big bully! Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. Lincoln is running through town, sweating, panting, tearful and very thirsty. The parents shook their heads up and down rapidly and nervously, the thought of being arrested terrified them and they couldn't stand the thought of being separated from their kids. I'm not bad luck. (She storms out of his room and into the hallway. Lincoln: I've had enough of this stupid costume! After that, for the remainder of the car ride, nothing was heard but the sounds of Rita's crying and her tears dropping from her face. We get it. Its a stupid mascot costume! Patching Things Up / Cheater by the Dozen. And with that the family walked out of the spa, the kids still angry and upset and the parents ashamed and disappointed in themselves. Lola: If it wasn't for Miss. "But you know what's even more lousy than that?" And with that, Felix fell unconscious, thinking about what kind of damage those kids would do in their anger. I hate grave digging and poems and I HATE DESPICABLE SPORTS!!! I loved winning so much that didn't take my failure like a good sport, and started thiswhole bycalling you bad luck. Lynn: (coughs) You know, if I knew that my superstitions would make Lincoln disown us I never would have started this nonsense in the first place. Lori soon pulled out her phone and dialed Aunt Ruth's number. Lincoln Loud, the middle child of the family, was brought to his older sister's baseball league from his own will. I only told Leni, Luan, Lana, Lola and Lily. We don't need to get violent here. I just hurt Lynn! The siblings were heard saying numerous phrases but they all pretty had the same topic, 'What did we do to get kicked out already?' I guess this proves it! How convenient for me. Lisa: That's the last time I ever fall for such phone-baloney! Cuts back to now. Except now I have to deal with the most annoying teasing that's ever existed. loud house no such luck alternate ending fanfiction The students of Royal Woods elementary were anxiously awaiting in line to get their yearbooks. ", Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myselffell for such bologna. "I can't even find anything funny to say because I'm that mad with both of you," Luan said, her parents becoming uncomfortable with the glare on the young comedian's face. kamenrider. "Kids," Lynn Sr. got up from his seat, not realizing how angry the kids were, "What are you doing here? "Yeah they did," Luan responded with. The last one he is shown reading has the Ninja Steel Rangers from Power Rangers Ninja Steel on the cover. Start talking. They all shouted. I hate it that you don't have any feelings or care anymore! I plan to do some more humorous parodies and some other stories that aren't going to be as serious as this one, so be on the lookout for that. HATE ME FOREVER!!! Lincoln: (crying berserker tears) NO!!!